SB Creations- Let Us Be Creative


SB Creations में आपका हार्दिक स्वागत हैं. इस वेबसाइट पर मेरी कहानीया, कविताये, लेख, समाज से जुडी जानकारिया आदि हैं. इन्हें पढ़े एवं शेयर करे.

धन्यवाद...

सुमित मेनारिया
⇧⇧CLICK HERE TO HIDE THIS BAR
Latest topics
» About SB Creation
Sat Jan 21, 2017 2:25 pm by smenaria

» ताश्री...Don't Look into her eyes!
Fri Jul 08, 2016 12:47 pm by smenaria

» The Hell Lovers (स्वास्तिक)....A Love Against the God 【preview- हिंदी में】
Fri Jun 17, 2016 2:29 pm by smenaria

» The Hell Lovers-Pictures
Thu Oct 03, 2013 5:36 pm by smenaria

» Swastik- The Story
Thu Oct 03, 2013 5:32 pm by smenaria

» Poelogues- Concepts
Thu Oct 03, 2013 5:28 pm by smenaria

» Introduction
Thu Oct 03, 2013 5:21 pm by smenaria

» सभ्य व्यक्ति
Thu Apr 18, 2013 7:18 pm by smenaria

» मुनि, बहूं & वृद्ध पुरुष
Thu Apr 18, 2013 7:09 pm by smenaria

Social bookmarking

Social bookmarking Digg  Social bookmarking Delicious  Social bookmarking Reddit  Social bookmarking Stumbleupon  Social bookmarking Slashdot  Social bookmarking Yahoo  Social bookmarking Google  Social bookmarking Blinklist  Social bookmarking Blogmarks  Social bookmarking Technorati  

Bookmark and share the address of SB Creations- Let Us Be Creative on your social bookmarking website


Paradise-I~ Realising the world

View previous topic View next topic Go down

Paradise-I~ Realising the world

Post by smenaria on Thu May 31, 2012 10:39 am

Paradise~ Realising the world

'Paradise' is a social creation. It includes creations about bitter truth of our society. It shows difference between what we say, what we think and what we do?

The Major Cast of stories is a poor Girl (and sometime his brother too). Who has to suffer the hate of society.

After first poem (which is in english) all next poems are hindi. Languege of this creations is damn is easy, since I considered feelings instead of words.

No way and no where I tried to hurt feelings of any society or any religion and if there is something like this please be patient and tell me about it.

Thanks....


Last edited by helllover on Thu Jun 14, 2012 9:43 am; edited 2 times in total
avatar
smenaria
Admin

Posts : 96
Points : 218
Reputation : 0
Join date : 02.05.2012
Age : 27
Location : The Hell

View user profile http://menaria.me.cc

Back to top Go down

Paradise I~ The Paradise

Post by smenaria on Thu May 31, 2012 10:48 am

Night was getting slowly dark,
Everywhere was dog's loudly bark.


Houses were lighting in their lights,
Someone was alone here in night.


Sunk in sorrow and sorrow was deep,
She could not, but she wanted to weep.


Parents was no more, she was alone,
Far from her, were reachmen's home.


In their city, heartless wood,
Since the morning, she was looking for food.


She called everybody, completed many rounds,
Tried again and again, but nothing was found.


Darkness was increasing, hunger was increasing,
With other peoples, hope was dicreasing.


When nothong was remained, hided all hopes,
She had to try, tried someone to stop.


A priest was returning, from the temple,
With sweet like 'god's bless's sample'.


Who don't want it, to give it to them,
Girl watched him and called him with shame.


He didn't listen it, she called again and again,
Nothing effect him, all were in vain.


Wanted to give them, who don't need that,
Wasn't it sin, for girl in heart was hate.


Doing that work, what hope was in eyes,
Giving it to them, could he get paradise.


This hell is on earth, then where is paradise,
If there is any, could he get paradise.
avatar
smenaria
Admin

Posts : 96
Points : 218
Reputation : 0
Join date : 02.05.2012
Age : 27
Location : The Hell

View user profile http://menaria.me.cc

Back to top Go down

View previous topic View next topic Back to top

- Similar topics

 
Permissions in this forum:
You cannot reply to topics in this forum